Professionalism Essay Contests

2024 Professionalism Essay Contest Winners

Beyond the Competent Professional: Healing with HeArt
Amily Tam
M.D. Candidate | Class of 2028
University of Hawaii John A. Burns School of Medicine

Professionalism in medicine is a multifaceted concept that encompasses not only the
acquisition of knowledge and skills but also the embodiment of core values that guide
interactions with patients, colleagues, and the broader community. At the John A. Burns School
of Medicine (JABSOM), professionalism is deeply rooted in the principles of respect, aloha, and
compassion, and it is essential to continually strive for excellence in both personal and
professional realms.

A professional actively seeks to improve and remains steadfast in their commitment to
providing the highest quality care to patients. This dedication is driven by an unwavering
responsibility to serve patients with the utmost competence and compassion. The essence of
professionalism is reflected in the pursuit of experiences that not only reinforce one’s passion for
serving patients but also acknowledge the interconnectedness with mentors, colleagues, students,
patients, and the larger community. Recognizing this interconnectedness, a professional acts in
ways that foster positivity and benefit all those they interact with.

My own experiences shadowing and volunteering with esteemed JABSOM faculty,
including Dr. Jinichi Tokeshi, Dr. Jill Omori, and Dr. Teresa Schiff-Elfalan, has profoundly
influenced my understanding of professionalism. Dr. Tokeshi’s philosophy of emphasizing the
“art” of medicine and Dr. Omori leading Hawaiʻi H.O.M.E. Project with “heart” at the center of
patient care has helped me to shape my own personal philosophy of care that serves as my daily
motivation. Dr. Omori’s emphasis on striving for excellence extends beyond academic
achievements; it encompasses a commitment to making a positive impact on the community. She
has taught me that genuine professionalism involves not just meeting the minimum requirements
but being motivated to effect meaningful change for those we serve.

Professionalism at JABSOM manifests as a commitment to treating oneself and others
with respect, aloha, and compassion. This philosophy is reflected in the way we conduct
ourselves with integrity and humility. A physician, despite extensive education and skills,
remains a servant to the community. We must continuously evolve, learn, and grow in our
mission to better serve our communities, recognizing that competence is just the baseline.
Striving for excellence involves creating an environment where others feel safe, cared for, seen,
and heard. Our learning journey is not solely about passing exams or obtaining licenses; it is
about growing to heal future patients and improving the overall well-being of those we serve.

Dr. Dee-Ann Carpenter’s teachings have further shaped my understanding of
professionalism. She emphasized the importance of knowing one’s origins, values, and sources
of joy. Professionalism involves treating others not merely as we ourselves would like to be
treated but in the manner that respects their individual needs and preferences. This approach is
particularly pertinent in medicine, where respecting patient autonomy and guiding them without
imposing our own values is crucial.

Ultimately, professionalism is defined by the actions we take when no one is watching. It
is about consistently doing the right thing and embodying the principles of A.L.O.H.A:
● Akahi: Kindness expressed with tenderness
● Lōkahi: Unity expressed with harmony
● Olu'olu: Agreeable and pleasant demeanor
● Ha'aha'a: Humility expressed with modesty
● Ahonui: Patience and perseverance

By integrating these values into our daily practice, we uphold the genuine spirit of
professionalism, ensuring that we provide exceptional care and contribute positively to the
medical community.

Our Duty of Aloha
Justin Abe
John A. Burns School of Medicine, MS3


As Dr. Travis Hong and I opened the door to a patient’s room in the emergency
department, we were met with a high-pitched scream. The young pediatric patient in the room
had a large animal bite on his face that ran across his cheek and after examining the injury, we
determined that suturing up the wound was necessary. The patient was wrapped tightly in a
blanket and held down by his parents as Dr. Hong carefully injected lidocaine to numb the area.
However, once Dr. Hong brought out the suturing needle, the patient’s screaming intensified and
he began thrashing around under the blanket. The patient’s writhing was so vigorous that it took
us nearly forty-five minutes to complete just a few stitches– Dr. Hong was forced to start over
three times after sudden movements tore the sutures.

Even after the procedure was finished and the incision was neatly closed, the patient
continued to shriek. We threw away our gloves in the trash and thanked the parents of the patient
as we left, the scream still echoing in our ears. As we entered the next patient room, a mother
was waiting with folded arms and a crossed expression.

“Do you know how long we’ve been waiting?” the mother demanded with some
additional expletives. “We’ve been waiting almost two hours, while my daughter is sitting here
just suffering.” She gestured to a young girl in the room with an erythematous rash on her right
thigh.

“I apologize for making you wait, there were some unexpected events that occurred,” Dr.
Hong said calmly. “Could I take a look at the rash–”

“No,” the mom said harshly. “I don’t think you deserve to take a look at her after what
you put us through.”

I turned to Dr. Hong, shocked. I had never observed this kind of reaction from a patient
before. It was obvious that the patient did not understand the chaotic room we had just left from
or the typical wait times for non-urgent emergency department visits. However, I was even more
taken aback by the compassion of Dr. Hong’s response:

“It is completely your right to decide how you would like your daughter to be treated and
I apologize again for the delay that you experienced,” Dr. Hong said calmly. “However, I am a
little concerned that I wouldn’t be able to provide optimal care for your daughter without a
physical exam– are there any alternative options you would be ok with? I know both of us have
the same goal of making sure your daughter is cared for.”

The mother was so caught off guard by Dr. Hong’s response that she initially was
speechless. When she finally regained her composure, she grudgingly agreed to let us examine
her daughter. After evaluating the rash, we were able to discuss treatment options and the
patient’s mother was pleasant for the remainder of the patient encounter.

This experience allowed me to observe the JABSOM Professionalism Philosophy in
action. Despite being exhausted after a grueling procedure, Dr. Hong was able to keep his
composure and effectively deescalate an uncomfortable situation. Dr. Hong’s responsiveness to
the needs of his patient superseded his own self-interest and he was able to skillfully provide
excellent patient care to all of his patients. In addition to upholding his respect to the upset
parent, his compassionate response even ended up resolving the parent’s aggression.

I believe that professionalism could also be described as our “duty of aloha” when we
care for patients– professionalism is our duty to show respect, empathy, and beneficence to our
patients, regardless of the circumstances. Even if we’re tired and even if patients are difficult to
work with, our duty is to provide compassionate care nonetheless.

Throughout my third year rotations, whether it has been fetching warm blankets for
pregnant patients at 3:00am or striving to give all patients the same effort and compassion
regardless of how they treat me, I have tried my best to uphold the highest standards of
professional behavior in the hospital and carry out my “duty of aloha.” I believe that
professionalism is a lifelong journey of improvement and I use my experience with Dr. Hong as
a goal to aspire to. In the future, I hope that as a physician I can conduct myself with integrity
and humility in any situation, and prioritize compassionate patient care above all else.

Professionalism Means Pono
Men-Jean Lee, MD, Professor
Department of Obstetrics and Gynecology


Professionalism at JABSOM to me means living pono in the healthcare ecosystem from education to training, to working in the hospital and clinics, from referring providers to faculty colleagues, collaborating with health insurance plans and hospital administrators, to communicating with staff and serving patients.

In its purest sense, living pono in the Hawaiian language is living with righteousness and balance; in other words, the art of finding balance between how one treats the land, people, and communities we serve each and every day.

Professionalism is the same Hawaiian philosophy in Western terms, but when applied in the workplace and a school of higher learning such as JABSOM, the faculty and learners must demonstrate a commitment to do right by each other and the patients we serve by treating everyone with compassion, integrity, and respect.

As educators and healers in Hawaii, pono is how we can bring people together from island to island in the middle of the Pacific Ocean to share knowledge and invite questions so that we can touch the lives of people who otherwise live in relative isolation--without judgement or making others feel bad about their circumstances.

Professionalism is living with guiding principles and a moral compass in which we always aim to do the “right” thing, even when no one is looking or forcing you to treat a fellow colleague with civility.

Living pono in the hospital setting is showing respect to the people and resources around us so that we give everyone a seat at the table to be seen and heard, and not let our precious healthcare dollars be wasted nor the trust of our patients be squandered for selfish motives.

Professionalism is being courteous and considerate to our fellow human beings whether they be a neighbor island referring practitioner who is asking for a consult or helping hand with a patient, a JABSOM student asking for guidance in applying for a residency program, or a patient who wants to leave the hospital for a few moments to watch her daughter walk across the stage for her high school graduation.


We, as JABSOM faculty, may not always agree with the decisions that others may make, but living pono means that we do right by others and do not put our own personal interests ahead of those around us because no one has the right to dominate another human being.


Behaving professionally is being willing to ask for help and being open to receiving help from those who might think differently from you by keeping an open mind with good intentions, a kind heart, a positive attitude, and a respectful tone of voice.


Living pono in the healthcare ecosystem encourages others to be at their best instead of creating unnecessary chaos that forces our support staff and trainees to clean up our messes which are trickling down to them.

As a JABSOM faculty member we should be modeling professional behaviors which align with the vision and values of our school and community of which we serve, which I already see
embodied by so many JABSOM student applicants as they start on their journey to becoming a physician.

Living pono means that we create a positive healthcare experience for our patients and a nurturing learning environment for our students.

Being professional means not sabotaging or denigrating the work of others for the purpose of elevating yourself, but celebrating everyone’s small wins so that we can all live with ALOHAAttaining Lasting Optimal Health for All.

Professionalism Essay Contest

2024 Professionalism Essay Contests

Background

The medical profession demands not only technical expertise but also a profound commitment to professionalism. Professionalism encompasses a multitude of qualities including integrity, empathy, respect, and a dedication to ethical standards. In an ever-evolving healthcare landscape, the importance of professionalism cannot be overstated. It not only fosters trust between healthcare providers and patients but also ensures the delivery of high-quality, compassionate care. 


Recognizing the significance of nurturing professionalism among scientists and healthcare professionals, the John A. Burns School of Medicine (JABSOM) is proud to announce an essay contest aimed at fostering reflections on the essence of professionalism in medicine.


Eligibility Requirements

  • The contest is open to all faculty/staff and enrolled students at JABSOM including undergraduate students, medical students, residents/fellows, and graduate students.
  • There will be two separate competitions featuring (2) cash awards in the amount of $250.00: one for learners (all students, residents or fellows) and one for faculty/staff.
  • Participants must be in good academic standing.
  • Collaborative submissions are not allowed; each essay must be the original work of a single participant.
  • One entry is allowed per individual.

Format Requirements

  • Essays must be written in English.
  • The essay should be typed, double-spaced and formatted to standard academic conventions.
  • Font size should be 12 point, and the preferred font is Times New Roman.
  • Essays should be 400-800 words in length.
  • All essays must include a title page with the essay title and the author’s name, academic program, and contact information.The title page does not count towards the total word count.
  • Essays must be submitted in either Microsoft Word (.docx) or PDF format.

Submission Requirements

  • Submissions should be sent via email to bwacker@hawaii.edu with the subject line: “Professionalism Essay Contest Submission.”
  • The deadline for submissions is August 31, 2024 by 11:59 p.m. (HST).
  • Late submissions will not be considered.
  • By submitting an essay, participants grant JABSOM the right to publish and/or distribute the essay, in whole or in part, in any medium for educational or promotional purposes.
  • All submissions will be evaluated anonymously by a panel of judges selected by the JABSOM Professionalism Advisory Committee.
  • Winners will be notified via email and announced on the JABSOM website and social media platforms.

Through this essay contest, we aim to inspire thoughtful reflections on professionalism in medicine and encourage students to articulate their understanding of its importance in shaping the future of healthcare. We look forward to receiving insightful and compelling essays from our talented JABSOM ‘Ohana.


Potential Prompts to Help You Reflect

  • How do you embody the JABSOM Professionalism Philosophy?
  • What experiences have you had that have enabled you to develop your views about what being a professional means?
  • What components of professionalism do you see embodied by JABSOM faculty and staff?
  • What does professionalism look like at JABSOM?
  • What does being a capable and effective professional mean? What are the components of professionalism?